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God Watches Me

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I may stumble
He picks me up
I may sin
He forgives me
I may cry
He comforts me
I may shout
He calms me
I may boast
He humbles me
I may judge
He convicts me
I may pray
He speaks to me
I may love
He loves me
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corrodingsun's avatar
i like this. for several reasons. first, i like the fact that God is not the One And Only True God The Books Tell Us About, but it's a rather indifferent, gnostic, personal God, as you don't use any canonical symbols (except for this love&peace-thing, but that's quite universal). the very second thing i like is the simplicity (read as: lack of vanity). it's humble & content.

desire nihil.